shadowhive: (Danny Tease)
[personal profile] shadowhive
Take Off Your Disguise
Pairing: Danny Worsnop/‘Jay James
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: Kinktober day 21: tentacles
Warnings: tentacles, sounding
Notes: damnit Nat giving me Danny brainrot, I’ve not even really a see or heard Asking Alexandria and I’ve been effected. Nat suggested I do something with him and tentacles and for some reason I remembered the Don’t Threaten Me With A Good Time vid and so (I did ponder making a less obvious title but…)

Danny downed the last of his glass of whiskey, setting it down on the bar. The alcohol burned a little in this throat, but it was a feeling that he always loved. Tonight, though, he was drinking to drown his annoyance.

He should be in the studio, with Ben and the others, working on new Asking Alexandria stuff. However when he had turned up at the studio slightly hungover Ben had told him to get out and sober up. Danny had thought that it was out of line, he was only slurring his words a little after all, but not wanting to start a fight he’d left instead.

At first he had headed home, passing out on the couch, but when he’d work he’d been too bored to stay home so he had something quick to eat and then came here. He waved the bartender over for a refill, which made that his third of the night and he took another sip as soon as it was handed to him.

After Ben’s rant he probably shouldn’t be drinking, but fuck it. Where was his sense of fun? He missed when they had wild nights, drinking and getting wasted together but now Ben and the others didn’t seem to be interested. He snorted to himself, taking another drink before swirling the golden fluid in his glass. Maybe he’d just have a few more and call it a night.

“Drinking alone? That’s not like you.” He looked up from the glass to the source of the voice, smiling instantly when he saw him.

“Jay? It’s so good to see you man!” Danny grinned at him, patting the stool beside him which Jay instantly sat in. “How’ve you been?”

It had been awhile since he’d seen Jay, the former bassist of Bullet For My Valentine. He’d dropped off the face of the map when the band announced he’d left and no one was sure what the exact story there was. Bullet themselves had been cagey and vague, and Danny hadn’t heard of anyone hearing from Jay since then. He’d tried to reach out at the time, sending him a message but he’d not heard back. He’d not been offended, because they weren’t exactly super close and leaving a band, even if it was a mutual decision, was always a sucky thing.

“I’m doing great man, it’s been a bit of an adjustment but, well at least I don’t have to deal with Matthew.” It took Danny a moment to realise that he meant Matt, Bullet’s singer, who Danny had gathered was an overbearing dick. He waved the bartender over, ordering a drink of his own before turning back to Danny. “How about you, how’re you doing?”

“That’s good to hear man, it’s great to see you again. As for me, I’m doing pretty good.” Danny took a sip from his glass as Jay’s drink was bought over to him. “We’re just in the studio, making starting work on a new album.”

“Oh yeah, with a new Asking Alexander album?” Jay asked as he drank from his own glass, which looked like something fizzy, though he hadn’t caught what he’d ordered.

Danny ignored the slight mispronunciation of his band’s name, not sure if he’d misheard it or if Jay had misspoke, but he didn’t want to make a big deal of it either way. “Yeah it’s our first week in the studio this week and things are coming together nicely. The guy’s are just working on a few things so I just figured I’d leave them to it and get a few drinks alone.” It was only a slight lie of course, but he wasn’t gonna bring up the shit from earlier. “But I’m grateful for the company.”

He found himself looking Jay over appreciatively while the other man had some more of his drink. The short sleeves of his top were showing off his muscular arms which were covered in tattoos and he couldn’t help but picture them pining him down.

“Me too. It’s nice to talk to someone.” Jay returned his smile, though it felt like it looked a little strange, almost like it was somehow too wide but just for a moment. It must’ve been a trick of the light, or the booze. “It’s felt like so long since I’ve been outside of Cardiff.”

“Well I’m glad you chose to come here and especially tonight!” Danny grinned and leaned a little closer to him, lowering his voice a little. “Listen man, I dunno if you’re up for it, but do you fancy coming back to mine?” He waggled his eyebrows suggestively, hoping that he’d get what he was going for.

Jay looked confused for a moment, then the smile returned. “Yeah, I’d definitely like that. But first, why don’t we dance.” The suggestion caught Danny a little by surprise, but he could tell Jay was eager, which was enough for him to go along with it.

“Sure, why not!” He downed the last of his drink and waved the bartender over again to pay for their drinks.

As soon as he paid Jay took his hand, pulling him from the bar and leading him downstairs. There was a small dance floor in the basement, filled with people dancing along to the beat of the music . Despite being a musician, Danny wasn’t usually one for dancing. His moves, such as they were, were mostly the drunken flailing of his limbs along with swaying of his hips. Jay didn’t seem to mind though, his body pressing up against his as they moved to the beat of the music.

As the music shifted to another to another song Jay leaned up, kissing him passionately as he looked his arms around him, holding him close as their bodies moved together. Danny parted his lips for Jay’s tongue, letting it slip inside, exploring his mouth and claiming it. It tasted sweet, but he put down to whatever the other man had been drinking and he pressed up against him. He was hard, both from the kiss and the closeness and he was sure he could feel Jay’s erection as he ground against his thigh.

When they parted from one another Jay licked his lips, then moved to kiss his along his neck. Their bodies kept moving to the music, though at the same time it all felt so far away, like the world had shrunk down to just the pair of them, with Jay rocking against his thigh, while his hands roamed his back and his tongue and teeth were on his neck.

“Let’s get out of here.” Jay whispered right into his ear and Danny nodded, the other man grinning and taking his hand, tugging him out of the room and back into the bar, before they both went outside into the cool night air.

Danny didn’t live too far away, but at the same time he didn’t feel like walking there but thankfully he spotted a cab on the other side of the street, dropping some people off. He got in the back with Jay, giving the driver his address and off they went.

The drive only took a few minutes, though felt longer, mostly because he wanted Jay to kiss him again, for him to grope him again. He was quite proud of himself for keeping it together and not begging for it, not wanting to come off as a total needy whore.

He paid the driver when they pulled up at his house, getting out and fumbling for his keys, unlocking the door and leading Jay inside. “Sorry about the state of the place, I wasn’t exactly expecting company.”

He didn’t even get to finish his sentence as Jay was pushing him against the wall, kissing him desperately. Danny moaned against his lips, squirming as he felt the other man’s hands on him, pushing his jacket off his arms. Jays tongue was in his mouth again, tasting as sweet as before and he moaned as it squirmed inside his mouth, completely dominating his own.

“Show me to your room.” Jay whispered when he parted from him, his green eyes glinting in the dark and Danny nodded, taking his hand and guiding him up the stairs to his room. He knew it was a complete state, but he didn’t really care, turning the light on as soon as he was inside. Jay grinned at him, his eyes on him completely. “Take off your clothes.”

“Yes sir.” Danny grinned, naturally slipping into the submissive role that he loved to be in, removing his clothing. This wasn’t going to be their first sexual encounter, though it was the first time he had Jay in his home, much less in his bedroom and he was glad that they were able to do this again. He took off his tee first, tossing it across the room without a care, exposing his slightly hairy chest. His fingers then went to his belt and he cursed himself for bothering to put one on as it was taking longer to buckle due to his inebriated state. Once he got the buckle undone he undid his fly, pushing his trousers down to the floors then his underwear, then removing his shoes, leaving him naked.

Jay looked him up and down approvingly. “Yes, you’ll do nicely.” The way he said it made Danny squirm and then Jay removed his clothing. He looked much like Danny remembered, although he was sure that there was more tattoos on him now then when they last met.

Once Jay was naked he approached him, kissing him hungrily again before pushing him back onto the mess bedsheets. He climbed atop Danny, his hands grabbing his wrists as they kissing pushing them up and away from his body.

Suddenly he felt something wrap around them, holding them in place tightly, he would have said that they were a rope, but it felt too different, not as rough. It felt solid, yet sift, holding him in place. He wanted to look, but Jay kept kissing him, his knees spreading his legs and then he felt the same feeling around his ankles, pining them to the bed.

Danny wasn’t a stranger to restraints, so he wasn’t afraid by whatever was holding him, though he was confused because how could Jay be restraining him when they were kissing?

Jay kissed him for much longer this time and when he pulled away Danny was breathless and dazed. It took a few moments for him to tilt his head to see what was holding his wrists but he found that he didn’t need to look all that way to find out, though he was sure he had to be seeing things, that he had to be drunker than he thought he was.

There, coming out of Jay’s body, were dark tentacles each about half the width of his arm. One was heading up to his arms, wrapped around his wrists, while two more were heading down to his ankles, holding them down against the bed.

Danny wasn’t sure how to react not sure if this was real, but it made his cock ache. “What are you?” He managed to ask, because he was sure that, whatever this thing was, it wasn’t Jay.

It grinned at him as it looked him over again and he could see hunger in its eyes. “I’m not your friend if that’s what you’re asking.” Its voice was different now, not the soft welsh accent of Jay, but he couldn’t place it exactly. It leaned back down to him, whispering in his ear. “Though he was delicious.”

His eyes went wide at that and he squirmed against the sheets, but the tentacles that held him were too strong. It laughed at his attempted to get away, grinning cruelly down at him. “What are you going to do to me?”

“I’m going to give you what you want. I’m going to give you the best fuck of your life, not that you’ll have time to fully appreciate it.” It wet its lips, looking him over its eyes lingering on his cock. “And fuck look at yourself you really are such a fucking pathetic whore.”

Danny couldn’t help but feel a little bit ashamed that he was still as hard as a rock, despite what the thing that wore Jay’s face was telling him. “Yeah I’m a whore and I’m proud of it! So if you’re going to fuck me just fuck me.”

Again it laughed at him, the grin on its face seeming to turn sharper. “Well then if you insist, though I am going to shed this form first.” Danny watched with wide eyes as it reached up behind his back, pulling at Jay’s skin. His arms bent wrong as his hands trailed down his back and then he they moved, pulling his skin off. It came off as easily as someone removing their clothes and Danny cried out, his eyes growing even wider at what he saw when the skin was discarded onto the floor.

As soon as the skin was tossed aside the various tentacles of the creature spread out, almost as if stretching. There were so many of them, some as thick as the ones holding him, while others were much smaller looking closer to fingers. They were all dark and he could see that they were various shades of green for the most part, those some were looked slick and slime. He’d not seen much slime in his life before, only on nature documentaries, but he’d not seen any that was red before.

At the center of the mass of tentacles there was what could be called a body, though the shifting tentacles concealed its exact form it looked more like a sphere, with bright green eyes glinting from within it.

Danny felt a lot of things as he looked at this creature. He felt scared, he felt awed and also he felt aroused, his cock still aching between his legs. The creature laughed again, though he couldn’t see it’s mouth. “Such a pathetic whore.” The tentacles on his ankles held them tighter and started manipulating them, moving his legs apart and up so his ass was more exposed. Once he was in that position more tentacles grabbed him, two holding his thighs which two more pulled his cheeks apart and he bit back a moan.

He saw another tentacle approach him, this one going between his spread cheeks and it rubber against his hole, spreading it’s slickness over him. He found himself sighing and he felt his hole relaxing, the tentacle forcing itself into him. It felt so good to be filled, Danny always loved it, but this felt so different to anything he had inside him before. The tentacle was easily as wide as one of the larger toys he had but it moved in no way a dick ever had and seemed to go deeper still, making him moan as it caught his spot, his eyelids fluttering in pleasure.

He could see the creature move so it was more above him and another tentacle came towards him, this one towards his mouth. “Open.” Before it even finished the word his lips were parting and the slick tentacle slipped into his mouth. The found that the slickness tasted just like Jay’s tongue had when they kissed and he wondered if that meant it had actually been a tentacle, maybe even the same one. He didn’t get chance to think on it more though as more of the slickness seeped out of it, overwhelming his senses.

As Danny moaned around the tentacle, swallowing down the sweet fluid that came from it, the tentacle in his ass start to move. It didn’t just move in and out of him either, but the whole length of it wiggled, making him groan as it pressed against his walls. It felt amazing, like nothing else he had ever had done to him before and he wanted this to happen again. Maybe if he did a good enough job the creature will want to keep him around, to do this to him again. He tried to clench his muscles, to squeeze around the tentacle, but he found he couldn’t, so instead he did his best with the one in his mouth. He squeezed his lips, flicking his tongue against it and he was rewarded by more of the sweetness.

The creature made a sound, a deep rumble and he hoped that was a good thing, that it was its version of a moan. More tentacles slithered towards him, one stroking his skin, another tangling in his hair, pulling on it and making him groan. Another was at his dick, stroking along his shaft. This one was one of the smaller ones and the slick contact made him let out a choked moan, his hips jerking up. The creature laughed and the tentacle rubbed at the slit of his head and Danny’s eyes widened, having a feeling he knew what was coming.

He’d been sounded a few times before, not as much as he’d like though that was cause it wasn’t something most were familiar with. As the tentacle thinned out and slipped into him he moaned, the overwhelming sensation. Usually when he had this done to him he could focus more fully on it, but with the tentacles in his mouth and up his ass, plus the others exploring his body, it was hard to focus.

There were more tentacles stroking his crotch, a few of them fondling his balls while another wrapped around his shaft, stroking him steadily.

The tentacle in his ass was now deep inside him and it felt like it was deeper than anything he’d ever taken. He’d taken a lot over the years, more cocks than he could count, toys of various sizes, even a few fists and forearms but this? This tentacle was bigger and better than any of them. Like the one in his mouth it seemed to be constantly oozing the slickness and he moaned.

His brain felt hazy and he wasn’t sure if it was because he was intoxicated, because he was so filled or because of his impending orgasm. But it felt good, better than any high that he’d had before.

“You’re close aren’t you? Fuck you’re even more of a slut than this one was.” The creature spoke in its deep voice, which seemed to be coming from everywhere and Danny found himself nodding as best he could. The tentacle in his dick slipped out and it felt like it instead expanded and enveloped his head, like a soft mouth. “Go on then, cum you pathetic creature.”

If his mouth wasn’t full he’d be crying out as his hips jerked up, feeling himself cum into the tentacle that surrounded him. He felt like he saw stars as he came and his body trembled under the tentacles that held him. It was strange though, he wasn’t just shooting one or two bursts of cum like he usually did when he came, but instead he just kept shooting over and over again. While it was strange, it did feel so fucking good, the tentacle inside him pressing and wiggling against his spot making him lose his mind.

One of the tentacles that was stroking his chest went higher and he felt it wrap around his throat. His mind, dazed from his pleasure, didn’t think much of it even when it started to squeeze. He felt more slickness spurt from the tentacles inside him though this didn’t taste as sweet, in fact it felt like it burned, though the one in his mouth went deeper down his throat.

“I can tell it was as good for you as it was for me.” The creature’s voice sounded different, almost like it was breathless. “In fact I think you were the best yet.” Danny’s body was trembling, his orgasms ended at last, though he couldn’t feel like he could even nod. “Goodbye Danny, you wouldn’t be missed.”

The tentacle around his neck squeezed even more and the one in his throat expanded, completely blocking off his airway as more of the slickness dropped down his throat. He struggle for air, his vision becoming blurry and he weakly struggled underneath the creature that held him.

And then everything went black.

***

He walked unsteadily to the corner of the room, where there was a full length mirror. He was glad that it was there as it gave him a chance to get a good look at himself in it.

This body was different than his last one. It was taller, the hair was longer and a different colour, there was hair across his chest and the ink covering it was different. It would definitely take some time to get used to.

“Hello I’m J…Danny, Danny Worsnop.” He frowned slightly shaking his head. No, that didn’t sound right, that was more like his old form. “Let’s try again.” He spoke, changing his accent so it was more like this new one. “I’m Danny Worsnop, how are you? Wanna fuck?”

Yeah, that sounded right, this one was definitely more open, more perverted than the last one was, that had been clear enough last night. He looked over to a set of drawers by the side of the bed and he knew that if he opens some of them he’d find even more proof that this man was a perverted whore.

Oh yes, he had a feeling this new body was going to be a lot of fun.

Now though he should probably clear up the mess that he’d made then get ready, he had to make amends for this body’s prior mistakes.

Date: 2024-01-30 11:46 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (dildo)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
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Date: 2024-01-31 12:03 am (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny chest)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
yes

haha

Date: 2024-02-01 12:24 am (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny fuck me)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Ok well first of all thank you for writing this for me, it was perfect *o*

I love how perfectly you wrote Danny, firstly with him being thrown out of the studio for being drunk even though he was swearing blindly he wasn't, and acting like it was everyone else's fault but his own, even though he's obviously the root cause of his issues and that the others have just grown up. And then sulking, and drinking more even though he 'doesn't have a problem', before Jay shows up. And he's surprised the party animal is drinking alone! :P

I really enjoyed the subtle hints that there was something not quite right with Jay. Like with the way he left Bullet and the guys were cagey about it and how he hadn't spoken to anyone since. Makes me curious to know whether Jay hunted Danny down as he was one of no-doubtedly a few people that tried to get in touch with him. (And now I say that, I wonder if he visited some of the FFAF guys before Danny, heh.) And then him calling Matt Matthew, and Danny's band Asking Alexander. Knowing the ending, I kind of like that the tentacle monster knows enough to get by, but doesn't know the EXACT details. If that makes sense.

Love how Danny was just eyeing Jay up like a piece of meat as well, eyeing his strong arms and wanting to be pinned down by them (topical for later I guess!) and then just not taking any time to invite Jay back to his for a fuck. Man is insatiable, barely any small talk before he is immediately jumping for a fucking 🤪

Agh the bit with the pair dancing. Danny is too drunk to do anything properly, not that I really think he would have much skill sober either, and is clearly just thinking about getting fucked, like how it mentions he was completely hard already and grinding himself against Jay like the insatiable whore he is, letting Jay's curiously-tasting tongue dominate him ♥

Ahahaha when they're in the taxi and Danny is all proud of himself for 'keeping it together and not begging Jay'. Danny, pls, love how he thinks he hasn't come across as a needy whore when tbf he didn't really need to say anything and his actions in the bar were clearly more than enough!

And the way he just doesn't care about what impression he is making on Jay with his house and bedroom being a complete mess, just turning on his light immediately so he can have a good view of Jay whilst they're fucking. All he can do is think of being fucked and I am so here for it!!!

Danny being an eager whore, calling Jay sir as he slips into his rightful role, and I love the mentions that he is still really drunk, struggling with his belt as he tried to remove it. It's like he almost regrets his choices because he would rather be a little more sober for his encounter with Jay.

“Yes, you’ll do nicely.” The fact that this made Danny squirm is just 💯 haha, such a slut seeking approval and so happy that Jay has given him the seal of approval after looking him up and down!

The first mention of tentacles, love that he doesn't realise what they are at first and thinks it's restraints, which he was no stranger to so wasn't afraid or nervous! Every single element of him is just "massive whore" and I am so here for it!

And then the reveal of the tentacles?? Of course he is immediately turned on, such is the degenerate that he is. And remains turned on even after the creature has fully revealed himself and has said that he has (essentially) killed Jay. Well damn haha. Also “Yeah I’m a whore and I’m proud of it! So if you’re going to fuck me just fuck me.” don't mince your words haha, love that he is still just eager for a good fucking despite everything!

I loved the way Danny was a little conflicted at the creature in front of him, a mixture of fear, awe and arousal, with arousal probably being the main feeling despite everything! And of course Danny doesn't fight it as soon as his legs are parted, he is just completely receptive and eager to be fucked with as many tentacles as possible. Such a slut :D :D

GODDAMMIT THE WAY HE WAS JUST LIKE "hey maybe if I impress the creature enough, it'll keep me around and continue to fuck me". And how he's trying to clench round the tentacle up his ass and suck off the one in his mouth to the best of his ability! I loved that little bit, he truly is insatiable here and I absolutely love it!

Also aahhhhh I love sounding in tentacle fics, can't say sounding is one of my fave kinks to read (I'll write/read it happily but it's not one of my main 'loves' if that makes sense?) but in tentacle form it's just like a million percent amazing?? Love that Danny wasn't really able to focus on anything at this point due to being so aroused!

The way the creature calls him an even bigger slut than Jay, hahaha. He's probably the biggest slut the creature has ever had, huh?! And how it calls Danny its best yet 👀 Almost makes me wonder if the creature may have considered keeping him around a little longer before properly claiming his skin, heh.

THAT ENDING WAS SOMETHING ELSE BY THE WAY. The way the creature is unsteady and uncertain, trying to work out how to move and act in its new skin. I absolutely loved the insanely ominous dark vibe, it was amazing! And how it adjusts its voice, introduces itself with "wanna fuck" (lol) and knows that Danny is a massive pervert, somehow knowing he has all sorts of fucked up implements in his bedroom despite not even seeing any of them??? And of course the feeling that the new body was going to be fun.

Also amends for Danny's mistakes?? Well DAMN hahahaha. Curious to know where he'll go first ;)

Anyway I really fucking loved this I think it may be my fave fic of yours of all time. And I'm so so so sorry it took so long to comment hope this rambly essay makes up for it lol ♥

Date: 2024-02-01 06:01 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny lil ponytail)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Well this is more than acceptable too, I enjoyed this tangent very very much 😁😁😁

Yeah absolutely, he thinks he is fine but the others can see he is being a problem (sorta like that infamous video of the crowd chanting 'drunk piece of shit' at him, and he is just arguing back whilst Ben is telling everyone to ignore what he is saying). And his solution is obviously the wrong one but he doesn't give a shit!

Heh, I like that way of thinking, of the monster perhaps seeking out whores that Jay had been with in the past. And obviously he had a few to get through in Cardiff first before moving on to Danny 👀

Oh yeah, and especially wouldn't pick them up if he was drunk as well!

Yep! I think he knows deep down inside that he is a "drunk piece of shit" so his way of pushing that out of his mind is to do his favourite thing aside from drinking, having sex haha

I loved the dancing scene, the way they were just so close to each other with the sexual tension and Danny basically being an eager whore as usual!!

Yeah he has definitely groped someone in a taxi on the way home. Hey, maybe he groped Jay on the way back to Jay's place the last time, and Jay called him a whore, so he is trying not to do it this time, to please him ;)

I feel I need to write something with Jay pinning Danny down with his strong arms. Hey, maybe that can be in the press conference fic 👀👀

Heh of course, he doesn't give being tied down a second thought and is distracted 😍

He totally would be turned on. Maybe he does think with his brain sometimes but usually his dick does his thinking and he's just like "fill me everywhere" heh

Hahaha I love that, the fact the creature is trying to make Danny more receptive before quickly understanding he is an insatiable whore and doesn't need any help. It's like when he is told to open up his mouth and it's done before the sentence is even finished 👀

To be honest I feel it was better that it ended with the creature in his skin, rather than him full of eggs. And hey, maybe that can be done another time ;) I really adored the ending of the creature in its new disguise it was amazing!!!

Of course! And I love that the monster is just like "I need to look after this slutty body so no more drink", heh.

Aww I'm glad! Yeah it's different from usual tentacle stuff but if anything it makes it better due to its uniqueness

Date: 2024-02-01 11:15 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny hot)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Yaaay hahaha

Yep. 🙄 He got mad at the crowd for shouting that at him and was like "everyone who thinks I'm a drunk piece of shit put your hands up", and literally even his bandmates did. And he was still picking fights, how can you be so fucking oblivious? At least he sorted himself out now.

Of course! Hey maybe that's why Matt left FFAF 👀 *coping mechanisms*

I feel he does a lot of things in order to brush the bigger issues under the carpet 🤔

Hahah yeah. I think in the back of his mind maybe he is afraid, but he is wearing his beer jacket and only thinking with his dick sooooo

Yep, most likely! I suppose the monster underestimated just how slutty he actually was, and how receptive he was too!

100%, I didn't really want the fic to end, so for it to finish as well as it did really helped!!!

Date: 2024-02-03 05:18 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny cloak)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Yea he was a fucking mess, no sympathy for him!!

That is the story I am choosing to believe and am sticking to it 🙃

Yeah absolutely! Although he really didn't seem afraid at all, more excited to get fucked by something different ahaha ♥️

Truly, the fiend that he is!

Yeah, tbh part of me would kinda like to see what happens next, of "Danny" now going out on the prowl, even though it would largely be the same as this fic lmao

Date: 2024-02-03 09:20 am (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny pleased)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Hello new coping mechanism fic

Date: 2024-02-03 05:19 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny red)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Yeaaaah haha not a good day.

And yeah lol, it's near the end of the video. He goes and picks it up, and looks very pleased with himself. I think I'm gonna go watch the whole thing on the TV this evening

Date: 2024-02-09 11:01 am (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny chest)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
I cannot describe how much I love this

Date: 2024-02-09 04:59 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny haters)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Yep

Also helloooooo coping mechanism 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣💀🖕🏻

Date: 2024-02-13 07:02 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (psycho pixelated)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
"We had to record Reckless And Relentless in two parts because I had to leave the studio"

Well well well

Date: 2024-02-20 01:58 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny chest)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Hi

Date: 2024-02-20 03:15 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny cloak)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
what can I say, I am but a simple creature

Date: 2024-03-04 10:18 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny black)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
thank u

Date: 2024-03-15 05:21 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny black)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Phew

Date: 2024-03-15 09:15 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (danny red)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Why does it surprise you. Literally why. 🤣🤣🤣

Date: 2024-03-24 12:39 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (cam)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Can't say I'm particularly stressed, upset or not in a good headspace right now. But I'm back for a re-read anyway ✌🏻 I love this

Date: 2024-04-13 06:37 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (ben)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Hello darkness my old friend

Date: 2024-04-15 08:52 am (UTC)
carrythefire: (lads)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
Needed some moral support midway through a 9-2230 shift

Date: 2024-09-07 12:42 pm (UTC)
fleshdoll: (pennywise (it chapter 2) ☆ just a prank)
From: [personal profile] fleshdoll
ohhh I REALLY like the creature you created here!!! the little hints that something wasn’t quite right with Jay from when they first met. I do love a good bit of foreshadowing and you did it quite well! to be honest though I think the reveal would have hit even harder if you hadn’t put jay’s name in quotes at the top because that kinda gave it away 😭 the reveal was still excellent though!

for me it was less about the sex (although yes, tentacles very hot) and more about the lore of the creature we don’t see that really hit right for me. it reminded me just slightly of the Stephen king book “desperation” which also features an entity (in this case it’s more of an incorporeal spirit though) that inhabits a person’s body after killing them, but the bodies only last so long and start to show visible signs like bleeding etc (at one point it coughs up a tooth or something) and then it’s like oops better kill another person and enter a new body!!

the creature here seems more to switch out of a sense of enjoyment for killing and wearing different skin for fun and I really like that 💀 when it reveals itself, shedding jay’s skin like clothes and all the tentacles spreading out was soooo perfect 10/10 👌 I could see it in my head perfectly.

I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS THOUGH like what’s its purpose for becoming famous musicians specifically? I assume it wants to be in the spotlight for some purpose, maybe it lays eggs or some other kind of breeding? maybe there are others of its kind so it’s seeking out more vessels?? does it only choose men and not women, perhaps for physical strength? does it have to um… penetrate its victims in order to possess it or is that part just for fun? 💀 does it absorb the memories of the host? (I only had that particular thought because it seemed to know Danny was a good victim since he’s not only into guys but apparently a lowkey dick addict 💀💀💀)

SORRY I AM SUCH A LOSER FOR TRYNA DEEP DIVE ON A MONSTER IN A SMUT KINK FIC I APOLOGISE FOR THE HORROR AUTISM

anyway of course the act itself was pretty damn hot, I am a bit weak for multiple appendages doing multiple things to a person at once 😳😳 I don’t normally enjoy sounding but here I thought it worked really well! I’m canon blind on Danny but I liked how he reacted differently to other characters you’ve written being nonconned/otherwise harmed in a /sx way by creatures like this (I thought of cpk, foolish, and owen in previous fics who all seemed some levels of terrified even if they kinda also enjoyed it in some level) but nah this guys like ok sign me up idk what you are and what you plan on doing but you’re sticking something big and thick in my ass and I’m here for it AND YK WHAT THATS EXTREMELY VALID I support him on that

anyways sorry for the long and rambly comment I very much enjoyed this fic despite not knowing the characters much at all and I would love to see you do more with shapeshifting creatures like this 😍 it is not a want but a need /nf

Date: 2025-03-19 07:48 pm (UTC)
carrythefire: (lick)
From: [personal profile] carrythefire
I really appreciate that when you wrote this, you had barely any idea what this shithead was like, and yet you wrote him perfectly what with the whole drinking, arguing with his bandmates and thinking he knew best!

And then he of course progresses into our preferred version of him heh, the degenerate slut. And also this is just such a great fic, I'm coming back to revisit because I just really like it

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