Sorry for the slow reply, I really suck! I know you know how much I enjoyed this but I hate not being able to comment right away!!! But anyway...I really loved the way Dan is just so antsy in this and the way you wrote him :) It was cute how he leapt at the chance to hang out with his friend, and I liked that Cam was an afterthought, he's more looking forwards to spending time with his friend but is also hoping for some action as well on the side ♥
I enjoyed his 'thoughts' on the others, with Danny being a wildcard and how he was intrigued on Paul 👀 I'm especially intrigued on Paul at the moment as well, honestly don't blame him if he decided to jump the sinking ship after carrying Danny and Cam all of last year and a decent chunk of the year before lol
THE WAY DAN JUST INSTANTLY CLOCKS JYRKI AT THE FESTIVAL, I CANNOT. I like that you can kind of tell his type, he doesn't outright say but he has eyes for Cam as well and they're both tall, dark and handsome, heh. And the way he just blanks James completely as he just fully eyes Jyrki.
I'm curious as to why Jyrki was watching Asking from the other side of the stage for a while before disappearing 👀👀
And then how Dan just excuses himself to go and track Jyrki down, and misses out on Kätilöt as a result. The chokehold that Jyrki has on him is definitely something though...because he's disappointed he missed out on some fun with the degenerates but there's another part of him that is just massively fixated on this mystery man...I feel as a result he isn't as 'peeved' as he could have been. (SIDE NOTE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED WITH THE ASKING GUYS AND TK)
Why did the guy in The Riff not know who Jyrki is considering he's Jussi's bandmate? 🥴
But on the other hand I ADORE how James just completely indulged Dan and found out who Jyrki was by way of Kätilöt. Side note I also want to know who James was with 😂😂👀
And then when Jyrki finally showed up and Dan was a magnet to him. How he was instantly chiding Dan for not approaching him at Nummirock when he knew he was watching him was great, but I also love that he didn't exactly make it easy for Dan to track him down, huh. Very much enjoyed how straightforward Jyrki was, simply asking Dan if he wanted to be fucked before bringing him to the basement!
Dan's reaction to the dungeon was great, I loved that Jyrki was expecting Dan to be a little perturbed by the surroundings, perhaps assuming he wouldn't be into such extremeties, but Dan is a filthy eager degenerate and I think that impressed him slightly! I like that Dan took the time to say he liked the place as well, haha.
Dan sure was eager to get going, I just love how he is in this. He's a bit of a slut but he's not a whore about it, if that makes sense - completely different to Danny, for example. And I love that. The way you've written him here just suits his personality perfectly ♥ ♥ ♥
Dan just got right into it with that booklicking, huh. Jyrki being impressed at him going to the sole unprompted, huh. I kinda like to think he underestimated Dan a little, but now that he's here he's changing his mind about him, even if he is an American ;) And he's beginning to think things are going to be a little wilder than he perhaps anticipated!
Ugh Jyrki flogging Dan, and Dan just being a massive slut for the pain. Jyrki really knew how to get him going, and I loved that he was all "you could just cum from me doing this" and Dan being so FUCKING UNASHAMED just like "yep" hahahaha I love it so much. And then Dan LOVING Jyrki manhandling him and throwing him about aaggghhh love that so much.
And then how Jyrki just gets right into it, fucking Dan and giving him more pain such as biting him. The way that Dan hoped his bite would leave a mark, like damn. He wants to be marked and proud! I also love how Jyrki 'begrudgingly' began to finish Dan "oh I suppose you've pleased me enough to cum" but idk, I kind of feel like that was a bit of a facade because of how impressed he was ;)
Jyrki's fake nonchalance was great btw, how after he'd finished he said he was good and that his band should remedy the fact they haven't played in Finland, heh. He's definitely eager for round two with this eager little slut who was more impressive than he expected!
ALSO UGH THAT ENDING. The way Cam leant into Dan and said he was jealous of the state Dan was in because he essentially likes to put men in that state too. I liked the note that Dan could smell the alcohol on his breath...it both showed how close he was to Dan, plus I like the subtle hint that perhaps Cameron wouldn't have said this normally but he's letting the alcohol talk for him and allowing himself to be a little more forward 👀 It definitely seems a bit out of character as James in the background seemed shocked! I love the thought of Cameron destroying Dan a little further to the extent he really wouldn't be able to walk afterwards huh 👀👀
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Date: 2025-01-31 10:10 pm (UTC)I enjoyed his 'thoughts' on the others, with Danny being a wildcard and how he was intrigued on Paul 👀 I'm especially intrigued on Paul at the moment as well, honestly don't blame him if he decided to jump the sinking ship after carrying Danny and Cam all of last year and a decent chunk of the year before lol
THE WAY DAN JUST INSTANTLY CLOCKS JYRKI AT THE FESTIVAL, I CANNOT. I like that you can kind of tell his type, he doesn't outright say but he has eyes for Cam as well and they're both tall, dark and handsome, heh. And the way he just blanks James completely as he just fully eyes Jyrki.
I'm curious as to why Jyrki was watching Asking from the other side of the stage for a while before disappearing 👀👀
And then how Dan just excuses himself to go and track Jyrki down, and misses out on Kätilöt as a result. The chokehold that Jyrki has on him is definitely something though...because he's disappointed he missed out on some fun with the degenerates but there's another part of him that is just massively fixated on this mystery man...I feel as a result he isn't as 'peeved' as he could have been. (SIDE NOTE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED WITH THE ASKING GUYS AND TK)
Why did the guy in The Riff not know who Jyrki is considering he's Jussi's bandmate? 🥴
But on the other hand I ADORE how James just completely indulged Dan and found out who Jyrki was by way of Kätilöt. Side note I also want to know who James was with 😂😂👀
And then when Jyrki finally showed up and Dan was a magnet to him. How he was instantly chiding Dan for not approaching him at Nummirock when he knew he was watching him was great, but I also love that he didn't exactly make it easy for Dan to track him down, huh. Very much enjoyed how straightforward Jyrki was, simply asking Dan if he wanted to be fucked before bringing him to the basement!
Dan's reaction to the dungeon was great, I loved that Jyrki was expecting Dan to be a little perturbed by the surroundings, perhaps assuming he wouldn't be into such extremeties, but Dan is a filthy eager degenerate and I think that impressed him slightly! I like that Dan took the time to say he liked the place as well, haha.
Dan sure was eager to get going, I just love how he is in this. He's a bit of a slut but he's not a whore about it, if that makes sense - completely different to Danny, for example. And I love that. The way you've written him here just suits his personality perfectly ♥ ♥ ♥
Dan just got right into it with that booklicking, huh. Jyrki being impressed at him going to the sole unprompted, huh. I kinda like to think he underestimated Dan a little, but now that he's here he's changing his mind about him, even if he is an American ;) And he's beginning to think things are going to be a little wilder than he perhaps anticipated!
Ugh Jyrki flogging Dan, and Dan just being a massive slut for the pain. Jyrki really knew how to get him going, and I loved that he was all "you could just cum from me doing this" and Dan being so FUCKING UNASHAMED just like "yep" hahahaha I love it so much. And then Dan LOVING Jyrki manhandling him and throwing him about aaggghhh love that so much.
And then how Jyrki just gets right into it, fucking Dan and giving him more pain such as biting him. The way that Dan hoped his bite would leave a mark, like damn. He wants to be marked and proud! I also love how Jyrki 'begrudgingly' began to finish Dan "oh I suppose you've pleased me enough to cum" but idk, I kind of feel like that was a bit of a facade because of how impressed he was ;)
Jyrki's fake nonchalance was great btw, how after he'd finished he said he was good and that his band should remedy the fact they haven't played in Finland, heh. He's definitely eager for round two with this eager little slut who was more impressive than he expected!
ALSO UGH THAT ENDING. The way Cam leant into Dan and said he was jealous of the state Dan was in because he essentially likes to put men in that state too. I liked the note that Dan could smell the alcohol on his breath...it both showed how close he was to Dan, plus I like the subtle hint that perhaps Cameron wouldn't have said this normally but he's letting the alcohol talk for him and allowing himself to be a little more forward 👀 It definitely seems a bit out of character as James in the background seemed shocked! I love the thought of Cameron destroying Dan a little further to the extent he really wouldn't be able to walk afterwards huh 👀👀
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